I don't want to share my writing because my writing is so far from being done it wouldn't be worth sharing  and because I am just pretty much embarrassed of what I wrote as well as the fact that I don't want to share in front of any one. Worst case scenario would be that its so bad Geoff would get up and actually punch me in the face.

Free Write

The cold makes me want to have a snow ball fight and go sledding. I love the snow so much the only way snow could be any better is if it wasn't cold then it would be perfect. I hate when i go sledding and it gets to cold and wet to continue if it wasn't cold then you could sled for days and make all the snow men in the world and have all the snow ball fights that never end!

Free write

I need to focus on using MLA format and elaborating on each topic more I picked out good topics but wasn't very descriptive about them

Response

My Response is in my folder

Chapters reveiw

It seems like jugis is getting himself into allot of trouble because he doesn't know how things work in America and because of that he is stuck in his current living place. I think its sad how he doesn't really know whats going on and because of that it seems like people are taking advantage of that or just watching it happen and they aren't doing anything about it. I think jurgis is hosed unless he gets a much better job or adapts to the way things work in America now other wise he is going to be pummeled by the rest of the competition and everything else. I really hope things work out for him but its looking like he wont figure things out.

My topic

My topic is about how being a slave owner corrupts the slave owner some of my reasons are that if you were to own a slave and treat them as less of a person you would begin seeing them as less then a person to and

chapter 11

I thought that it was so awesome how douglass escaped it was even better how he got away and intead of hiding he actually does something about slavery  by joining the antislavery group this shows that he really wants to end slavery and thought beyond himself.